April 2024

Descriptive Writing and Mindfulness: How One Reinforces the Other

I teach high school students, the bunch that is most wild, unorganized, and constantly in flux, yet passionate and aspiring. I have been a teacher for a long time now, but I essentially missed the art of teaching descriptive writing until recently I realized my flaw. I now ask my students to find the best definition of descriptive writing online, discuss it among peers, and then write the most detailed paragraph they can about the school building and its surroundings. What I get is reporting, detailed but tedious. Once they read it out loud, they, too, realize the monotony of it. We read a curated list of paragraphs to familiarize ourselves with what an ideal passage of descriptive writing should look and sound like. The one I love is the chapter “The Freedom of the City” from John Baxter’s The Most Beautiful Walk in the World. Then I take them for two rounds of walking in and around the school precinct, telling them to observe closely everything and anything they can lay their eyes on as well as smells and sounds that they can sense. In the second round, we add adjectives, metaphors, and other literary devices to all the observed things. Their task for the day is to rewrite their earlier passage with all the new inputs and adjectives. We edited the passage at least five times, with me dropping clues and hints on what could have been a more descriptive version of it. As the class progresses, our walks and outings also increase: public dispensaries, cafes, parks and gardens, school picnics, excursions, everything becomes more exciting for all of them. There is always a contest running about who is the most observant. Most students have a blog where they upload the writing exercises I give them. What I never expected as the by-product was mindfulness. Students seemed to be fully attentive to what was happening, to what they were doing, and to the space they were moving through. The attention deficit I saw in them decreased considerably.     Descriptive writing is not just describing, neither reporting what is where and who is like whom, nor just using adjectives and vivid imagery. It is absorbing the surroundings to their fullest, getting creative, and being courageous enough to take the leap of redesigning it, restructuring it according to one’s taste, molding it to one’s imagination and fancy, and creating the extraordinary out of the plain ordinary. Now the students can come to the front, close their eyes, and describe a scene from the market or create one out of their pure imagination, placing things all around them, giving colors to objects, tastes and smells to the samosas being fried at the food stall, sounds to the vendors selling clothes and the motorcars passing by. They can read out the boards over the shops and place the woman combing her hair on the balcony at the far right. They can transpose themselves to the market or bring it to the class. First Published in Whale Road Review.Read Bupinder Singh Bali’s latest book; Those Who Stayed; The Sikhs of Kashmir

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My Top 10 recommendation for new readers

September 22,2023 Writing and Reading go hand in hand. Both compliment each other. It’s like a kiss – you can’t do it alone. Reading makes you aware, open-minded and gives you an insight into a world which doesn’t exists for people who don’t read. Reading is like self-stimulating your mind to achieve the mental orgasm. Reading is to mind what exercise is to body. My Top 10 recommendations for new readers. Ever wonder what made writers like Charles Dickens, William Shakespeare, Leo Tolstoy, Franz Kafka, etc, the greatest of all time? What made them stand out from the rest? What validation they had unlike their peers? The answer is READERS. Vladimir Nabokov, The Russian writer, who wrote Lolita, used to say that readers are not sheeps, not every pen can tempt them. The GOATs had a set of intelligent audience who knew what a good piece of writing is. 01. The Alchemist – Paulo Coelho “kisi cheez ko agar dil se chaho, to poori kaynat use tum se milane me lag jati hai. ” Remember this scene from King Khan in Om Shanti Om? It became one of most iconic Bollywood scenes and these lines were immortalised there after. All thanks to Paulo Coelho, who actually gave us these lines in The Alchemist. It’s a simple read but an enriching experience. No one knows what the treasure is, or if Santiago will be able to surmount the obstacles in his path. But what starts out as a journey to find worldly goods turns into a discovery of the treasure found within. Lush, evocative, and deeply humane, the story of Santiago is an eternal testament to the transforming power of our dreams and the importance of listening to our hearts.This story, dazzling in its powerful simplicity and soul-stirring wisdom, is about an Andalusian shepherd boy named Santiago who travels from his homeland in Spain to the Egyptian desert in search of a treasure buried near the Pyramids. 02. The Great Gatsby – F. Scott Fitzgerald Tobey Maguire, Leonardo Di Caprio are the two names that pop up in your mind when you first hear about the Great Gatsby. The Romantic drama was based on the 1925 novel of the same name. The story primarily concerns the young and mysterious millionaire Jay Gatsby and his quixotic passion and obsession with the beautiful former debutante Daisy Buchanan. Considered to be Fitzgerald’s magnum opus, The Great Gatsby explores themes of decadence, idealism, resistance to change, social upheaval and excess, creating a portrait of the Roaring Twenties that has been described as a cautionary tale of American Dream. 03. The Kite Runner – Khaled Hosseini Devastating, heartbreaking, thrilling, moving, unforgettable and the list goes on. One of my personal favourites, Kite Runner is a story of Amir and Hassan. Amir and Hassan are young boys who spend their days playing together but there is something that divides them. It is the class difference as Amir is a rich Pashtun boy but Hassan is his servant’s son. Assef, a bully, often taunts Amir for being friends with a servant boy but it is Hassan who has always protected Amir from bullies. At the local kite flying tournament, Amir wins and Hassan runs to catch the last cut kite. He manages but is caught up by Assef and his gang. They beat him up and then rape him. Amir sees all of this but is too scared to save Hassan. It is something he cannot forgive himself for but years later, he has the opportunity to redeem himself. But does he manage to raise his voice against atrocities he sees this time around? A story of growing up, discovering family secrets and making life-long friendships, this novel is bound to touch you. 04. To Kill a Mocking Bird – Harper Lee A modern American literature classic and Pulitzer Prize winner, To Kill a Mockingbird is found on almost every bookshelf and reading list. The plot brings out the issues of rape and racial inequality through the eyes of a six-year-old narrator, and explores the concepts of right and wrong, just and unjust. Atticus Finch, a widowed father of two and a prominent lawyer, encourages his children to be empathetic, and always leads by example. Soon, the story escalates and we embark on a thrilling journey of Finch fighting a black man’s case and his daughter (the narrator) standing up for her father’s honour. 05. Columbine – Dave Cullen This book, which took journalist Dave Cullen 10 years to research and write, will keep you reading through the night. It will also make you reconsider any bias you might have had against the nonfiction genre. Columbine explores the school shooting of 1999, leaving no stone unturned and leaving no myth of the event unexplored. It provides an interesting, thorough, and fresh look into an event that dominated the news cycle at the time, switching from the events leading up to the day and the political, media, and community reaction that happened afterward. 06. Train to Pakistan – Khushwant Singh Written by Khuswant Sing, Train to Pakistan is a classic novel that describes the once lived lifestyle of Sikhs and Muslims together in peace for hundreds of years. Then one summer the train arrives with thousands of refugee bodies. It is the first time that the villagers tasted the horror of civil war.The story portrays the enduring love between a Sikh guy and a Muslim girl and surpasses the hatred of civil war. 07. The Catcher in the Rye – J. D. Salinger The Catcher in the Rye is a popular read among all the readers going through a phase of rebellion. The protagonist Holden Caulfield has been expelled from his school due to poor grades. He is at a confusing place in life and cannot even imagine telling his parents about the whole ordeal. Quite typical, isn’t it? The book is the journey of Holden who finds that he is shedding away his childhood to enter the

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